Biopoem
Greg
Hard-working, caring, laid-back, intelligent
Son of Margaret and August, Father of Samantha
Who loves science fiction, nature, and all good things
Who loves the lake, enjoys naps, and is passionate about knowledge
Who fears disappointing those he loves, ruining the earth, and being out of shape
Who became a dentist and raised his daughter well
Who wants to see those he loves succeed and the world change
Born in Iowa and living in *********
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Haiku
Spring approaches now
Fresh air, warmth, promise
Anticipation
Tanka
Sprinting down the field
Shouting, cheering, screaming loud
Defense, steal the ball
Offense, take it all the way
We have got to score that goal.
I liked the visuals in your poems alot. Escpescially the Haiku and how it made me wish it was Spring.
these were very good poems. the bio poem really stood out to me. once thing to work on is in your bio poem, put a little more into it. other than that great poems.